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The charts given below show the ratio of students from different countries in a random Canadian college in three different years.

The charts given below show the ratio of students from different countries in a random Canadian college in three different years. raJgp
The combination of pie charts illustrates the proportion of students from four different countries placed in a Canadian college from the year 2015 to 2017. Looking from an overall perspective, In 2015 and 2016 most of the students are from China which is decreased in the year 2017. In 2017, Most of the students came from India. To Commerce the analysis, India is the region from where the number of students increasing continuously where it was 25% in 2015, 30% in 2016, and became 30% by the end of the survey year. Now Let's talk about China from where the maximum number of students came in 2015 by 40%, which is decreased by 35% and 30% respectively at the end of the period. Germany and Sri Lanka both came in the same category because of their inconsistency in terms of students that came from these countries.
The combination of pie charts illustrates the proportion of
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students
from four
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different
countries placed in a Canadian college from the year 2015 to 2017.

Looking from an
overall
perspective, In 2015 and 2016 most of the
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students
are from China which
is decreased
in the year 2017. In 2017, Most of the
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students
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came
from India.

To Commerce the analysis, India is the region from where the number of
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students
increasing
continuously
where it was 25% in 2015, 30% in 2016, and became 30% by the
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end
of the survey year.
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Now
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Let
's talk about China from where the maximum number of
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students
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came
in 2015 by 40%, which
is decreased
by 35% and 30%
respectively
at the
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end
of the period. Germany and Sri Lanka both
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came
in the same category
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because
of their inconsistency in terms of
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students
that
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came
from these countries.
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IELTS academic The charts given below show the ratio of students from different countries in a random Canadian college in three different years.

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