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The line graph illustrates the quantity of waste recorded in tonnes for a duration of 15 years produced by three corporations. Overall, it is clear that the waste produced by company A has been declining while the waste produced by company C has been steadily rising over the years. On the other hand, the waste produced by company B has witnessed a rise before significantly dropping over the period. In 2000, across all three corporations, the lowest waste was produced by company C at approximately 5 tonnes while company A produced the highest amount of waste at 12 tonnes. In 2005, company A still remains at the top spot producing approximately 11 tonnes while company C remains the lowest of the three producing only 6 tonnes of waste. Company B on the other hand, produced about 7 tonnes in 2000 before increasing their waste output to a figure of 10 tonnes in 2005. The trend seems to shift over the years when company A seems to gradually decrease their waste output at 9 tonnes in 2010. In contrast, despite remaining lower than company A, company C continues to grow at 8 tonnes in 2010 before surpassing company A in 2015 at about 10 tonnes. In the same year, company A recorded a a figure of about 8 tonnes in waste output. Conversely, company B witness a sharp drop at 7 tonnes in 2010 and continue to fall at only 3 tonnes in 2015, making it the lowest producing waste output company during the same year
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recorded in tonnes for a duration of 15 years
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produced
by three corporations.

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, it is
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clear
that the
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waste
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produced
by
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company
A has been declining while the
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waste
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produced
by
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company
C has been
steadily
rising over the years.
On the other hand
, the
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waste
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produced
by
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company
B has witnessed a rise
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before
significantly
dropping over the period.

In 2000, across all three corporations, the lowest
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waste
was
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produced
by
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company
C at approximately 5 tonnes while
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company
A
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produced
the highest amount of
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waste
at 12 tonnes. In 2005,
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company
A
still
remains at the top spot producing approximately 11 tonnes while
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company
C remains the lowest of the three producing
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only
6 tonnes of
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.
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Company
B
on the other hand
,
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produced
about 7 tonnes in 2000
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before
increasing their
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waste
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output
to a figure of 10 tonnes in 2005.

The trend seems to shift over the years when
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company
A seems to
gradually
decrease their
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waste
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output
at 9 tonnes in 2010.
In contrast
, despite remaining lower than
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company
A,
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company
C continues to grow at 8 tonnes in 2010
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before
surpassing
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company
A in 2015 at about 10 tonnes. In the same
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year
,
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company
A recorded
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a a
figure of about 8 tonnes in
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waste
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output
.
Conversely
,
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company
B witness a sharp drop at 7 tonnes in 2010 and continue to fall at
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only
3 tonnes in 2015, making it the lowest producing
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waste
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output
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company
during the same
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year

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6.0
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