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The line graph illustrates the proportion of the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 to 2015.

The line graph illustrates the proportion of the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 to 2015. Xlg7P
The polyline graph illustrates the proportion of the three separate nations like UK, France and Germany for household reproduce rates from 2005 to 2015. Overall, it can be clearly seen that, France's household recycling rates in downward trend. While, two other countries convert rates in upward trend. Further more information about this chart that, UK or France reused house material more than Germany during the period 2005 to 2015. In uk, the figure of household reused repeatedly increased between approximately 35% in 2005 and significantly 55% in 2011. Suddenly, this figure was slightly grew up from 2011 to 2015. However, Germany's housework machines covert rates dramatically to high peak up during 2005 to 2011. Although, from 2011 to 2015, this figure rose around slowly in upward trend respectively 45% to 66%. Moving towards, reproduction household rates in Germany were massively decreased between 2005 to 50% and 2013 to 30%. Subsequently, this figure boost during the period 2013 to 2015. Although, it can be lucid that, UK or France highest regions household recovered rates more than Germany during the all over the period.
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material more than Germany during the period 2005 to 2015. In
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was
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grew up from 2011 to 2015.
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, Germany's housework machines covert
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rates
dramatically
to high peak up during 2005 to 2011. Although, from 2011 to 2015, this
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rose around
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in upward trend
respectively
45% to 66%. Moving towards, reproduction
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household
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rates
in Germany were
massively
decreased between 2005 to 50% and 2013 to 30%.
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boost during the period 2013 to 2015. Although, it can be lucid that, UK or France highest regions
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household
recovered
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more than Germany during the all over the period.
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the proportion of the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 to 2015.

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