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The chart shows the hours per week spent watching TV by gender and by age group in 2011 in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparation where relevant.

The chart shows the hours per week spent watching TV by gender and by age group in 2011 in Australia. ebVQ7
The bar chart tells us how many hours a week, on average, male and female Australians of various ages spend watching TV. Males aged under 15 watch an average of 15 hours of TV per week, which is almost half of the 26 hours that females spend watching it. This figure then rises to 18 hours a week for males aged 15-25 (the highest number of hours for males), before falling to 16 for males aged 26-35. There is a further drop to 10 hours per week for males aged 36-45 (the lowest number of hours for males). Thereafter, the figures rise to 15 hours per week for males aged46-55, with a further rise to 17 hours for males aged over 55. On average, females aged under 15 watch more hours of TV (26) than any other age group of either gender. This figure falls to 20 hours for females aged 15-25, followed by a further drop to 17 hours for those aged 26-35, with yet another fall to 8 hours for women aged 36-45. This is the lowest figure for men or women of any age group. There is then a rise to 18 hours a week for women aged 46-55 and another increase to 20 hours for women aged over 55. In summary, the trend for people aged 15 and over is the same for men and women, with the 36-45 age group watching the least TV.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the hours per week spent watching TV by gender and by age group in 2011 in Australia.

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