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The diagrams below indicate the alterations of student accommodation building between 2010 and nowadays. Overall, it is obvious that the building changed considerably throughout the 11-year period, four new features involve student-bedroom, ensuite-room, social area and car park. Another prominent feature is that significant modifications would be witnessed in terms of demolishing the garden areas to serve the academic purposes. In 2010, the building was surrounded by gardens on the North and South side, yet that was not the case for now when it was removed to pave way for other facilities. In the present day, part of it in the North West is eliminated to make room for student-bedroom. Moreover, car parking is constructed to replace the entire garden on the North side. In terms of the building indoors, the number of student-bedroom are also developed because of modernizing the living room. On the other hand, the kitchen remained unchanged over the period but then it is also a social area. The en-suite room is erected opposite the bathroom which shows no change in the heart of the building.

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