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The layouts illustrate the map of a school in 1985 and lots of changes that have taken place at present. We can easily show that a lot of changes have occurred in the current layout of a school. In 1985, mostly just under a half area only acquire by playing fields and attached with a road which connects with an entrance and exit. Between this, there was a car park area. To the east of the middle of the road, there was one classroom block with two stories in the opposite direction were second areas of the car park and classroom also had a library and office over there the population of students was around 1500. In the present day, they connected the road from an entrance to exit and between this road it is one car park area. The library is made into a learning resources center and also in this, they have a computer room and now school has two classrooms area which built opposite of each other classroom block with 2 stories is removed by 3 stories they also planted some trees near the road. They reduced the area of playing fields and they opened up pool and fitness room in that place.

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show
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changes
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current
 layout of a school.

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road
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. To the east of the middle of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
, there was one classroom block with two stories in the opposite direction were second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
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 of the car park and classroom also
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road
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. The library is made
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