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The line graph illustrates the proportion of money spent by government on Medical care, education and pension since 2001and also the proportion expected to be spent till 2051

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The line graph illustrates the proportion of the money spent by government on Medical care, education and pension since 2001 and also the proportion expected to be spent till 2051. In detail, in 2001, expenditure on education was nearly 15%, while the expenditure on Medical care and pensions was around approximately 11% and 6% respectively. Over the next 20 year, the spending on education fell marginally to 14 %, while the spending on Medical care increased gradually to 12 %. From 2020 to 2051, it is expenditure that education would decrease slightly to 14 %. To spending on medical care is also estimated to decrease and reach 4% by 2051, by contrast, it is expected that there will be an increase in spending on pensions remained unchanged. Overall, at the beginning the period the maximum expenditure was done on education but in 2051, it is expected that the highest spending would be on pensions. Also, it is predicted that spending an education would remain relatively stable, spending on pension would increase.
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the proportion of money spent by government on Medical care, education and pension since 2001and also the proportion expected to be spent till 2051

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