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Production of pears as canned fruits

Production of pears as canned fruits XDL1g

The assigned diagram Highlights the production of canned pears. There are 14 steps involved from picking through hands to dispatching in the market At a fleeting glance, it is immensely clear that, the fruits are picked by hand and transport through trucks. After that, they are washed properly and are tested for quality. The fruits that passes the quality control are stored and graded according to their weight. Further scrutininsing the chart, the graded pears are peeled off for slicing. The pears are later canned and sealed property. In the Wake of this step, the canned pears are heated for Cooking and labelled before they are stored in the penultimate step and dispatched in the market for sale Overall, it is lucca that it is a complex process. All the steps are mandatory to be followed, if any of the step is missed, the process will come to halt.

The assigned diagram Highlights the production of canned pears. There are 14 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
steps
 involved from picking through hands to dispatching in the market At a fleeting glance, it is immensely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that, the fruits are picked
 by hand and transport through trucks. After that, they are washed
properly
 and are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluated
tested
 for quality. The fruits that passes the quality control are stored
 and graded according to their weight. Further
Possible spelling mistake found.scrutinizing
scrutininsing
 the chart, the graded pears are peeled
 off for slicing. The pears are later canned and sealed property. In the Wake of this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
, the canned pears are heated
 for Cooking and labelled This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 they are stored
 in the penultimate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 and dispatched in the market for sale Overall
, it is Possible spelling mistake found.LuccaLuciayuccaLucaLucía
lucca
 that it is a complex process. All the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
steps
 are mandatory to be followed
, if any of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
is missed
, the process will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to halt. 