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The graph below shows average obesity rates in the USA according to gender from 2000 to 2008. Summarize the given information by reporting the main features and making comparisions where relevant.

The graph below shows average obesity rates in the USA according to gender from 2000 to 2008. Summarize the given information by reporting the main features and making comparisions where relevant. 26NEo
The given graph compares the number of job postings in 3 years: 2008, 2009 and 2010 in different respectively categories: management, hospitality, sales and marketing. Looking at the management first, in 2008, it reached a peak of 20 but in the next year, it dropped significantly to just 12 and in the last year, it recovered back to 18. Similarly, in the hospitality, in the first year a top of 19 was clearly to be observed. From then on, there was much larger distances of decrease than management which went down to 7. In 2010, it increased with lower rates as compared to management which recovered back to 10. In contract, in sales and marketing, the last year is when it had a top. Starting from 9, however, it decreased to 5 in the middle year. A remarkable growth was obivously captured which lead to take the highest number of 17 in the final year. Overall, all categories indicated both a downward and upward trend, recursetively. It is clearly that sales and marketing saw the highest rates of growth, while hospitality had highest rates of decrease.
The
given
graph compares the number of job postings in 3 years: 2008, 2009 and 2010 in
different
respectively
categories:
management
, hospitality, sales and marketing.

Looking at the
management
first
, in 2008, it reached a peak of 20
but
in the
next
year
, it dropped
significantly
to
just
12 and in the last
year
, it recovered back to 18.
Similarly
, in the hospitality, in the
first
year
a top of 19 was
clearly
to
be observed
. From then on, there was much larger distances of decrease than
management
which went down to 7. In 2010, it increased with lower rates as compared to
management
which recovered back to 10.

In contract, in sales and marketing, the last
year
is when it had a top. Starting from 9,
however
, it decreased to 5 in the middle
year
. A remarkable growth was
obivously
captured which lead to take the highest number of 17 in the final year.

Overall
, all categories indicated both a downward and upward trend,
recursetively
. It is
clearly
that sales and marketing
saw
the highest rates of growth, while hospitality had
highest
rates of decrease.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows average obesity rates in the USA according to gender from 2000 to 2008. Summarize the given information by reporting the main features and making comparisions where relevant.

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  American English
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