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The line graph illustrates the population figure of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012. Summarise the information

The line graph illustrates the population figure of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012. Dlqoa
The given line graph illustrates the population rate of four different Indian turtles over a period of 32 years (1980-2012). As an overall perspective, the generation of turtles had a fluctuating trend throughout the year. The highly populated ones are olive Ridley turtles whereas the least number was the leatherback turtles. The population rate starts from 100 by all four types of turtles in the year 1918. Olive Ridley turtle made a significant increase in population and reaches at 140 between 1996 and 1998. Later it showed a fluctuating trend and drop to 300 in the final year. In terms of leatherback turtles, the population figure reaches the peak in 1985 which is about 110 and decrease 90. This species of turtles had a remarkable drop after 1989 and reached about 60 in 2012. With regards to green turtles and other all species remark fluctuating population rate and reached to 110 and 90 respectively in the final year.
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over a period of 32 years (1980-2012).

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had a fluctuating trend throughout the
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. The
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Ridley
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turtles.

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1918. Olive
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Ridley
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made a significant increase in
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and reaches at 140 between 1996 and 1998. Later it
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a fluctuating trend and drop to 300 in the final
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. In terms of
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leatherback
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turtles
, the
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figure reaches the peak in 1985 which is about 110 and decrease 90. This species of
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turtles
had a remarkable drop after 1989 and reached about 60 in 2012.

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and other all species remark fluctuating
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rate and reached to 110 and 90
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in the final
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the population figure of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012.

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