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The process shows how waste glass bottles are recycled. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the main details.

The process shows how waste glass bottles are recycled. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the main details. m189N
The diagram gives information about the twelve-step process of glass recycling. The process begins at home where people gather glass bottles and jars separately. After that, they dispose the trashin the recycling bins. Next, people from the recycling companies collect it and deliver it to special factories. The following step is to dispose the glass containers onto machine, which cleans the the bottles. After being washed they are ready to be sorted by colour and then they are transfered to another factory. When there arrive at the factory they are melted in a special melting device. The next step is done by a machine, which shapes and re-forms the melted glass into bottles. Right after that, the new bottles are taken to another factory, where they are being filled up with some kind of drink. Then caps and labbles are put on the bottles. The final step is to transfer the bottles from the factory to the markets, where consumers can buy it and the process can begin again.
The diagram gives information about the twelve-step process of
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glass
recycling.

The process
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begins
at home where
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people
gather
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glass
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bottles
and jars
separately
. After that, they dispose the
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trashin
the recycling bins.
Next
,
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people
from the recycling
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companies
collect it and deliver it to special
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factories
. The following step is to dispose the
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glass
containers onto machine, which cleans
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the the
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bottles
. After
being washed
they are ready to
be sorted
by
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colour and
then they are
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transfered
to another factory.

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When
there arrive at the
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factory
they
are melted
in a special melting device. The
next
step
is done
by a machine, which shapes and re-forms the melted
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glass
into
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bottles
. Right after that, the new
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bottles
are taken
to another
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factory
, where they are
being filled
up with
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some
kind of drink. Then caps and
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labbles
are put
on the
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bottles
. The final step is to transfer the
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bottles
from the
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factory
to the markets, where consumers can
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buy
it and the process can
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begin
again.
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IELTS academic The process shows how waste glass bottles are recycled. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the main details.

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3 paragraphs
169 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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