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The bar shows about total amount of virus in three regions

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The bar chart provides information about the covid-19 case in ASEAN. Singapore had the highest amount of cases, while Laos had the least number of cases. Indonesia is the second highest with the total 11. 396 cases. The table shows the quantity of people that confirmed, death and recovered In three different regions of Indonesia According to the bar chart, Singapore was the highest following by Indonesia, Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, Vietnam, Myanmar, Brunei, Cambodia and last but not least Laos with the lowest quantity of affected people. Singapore and Indonesia only got a slight different while Singapore and Laos got a big difference. The table shows that Jakarta had the highest number of confirmed and death people, whereas East Java had the lowest total of affected and death people. East Java and West Java only got a slight different of confirmed people, on the other hand the sum of death people in West Java was the least from the three other regions.
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case in ASEAN. Singapore had the highest amount of cases, while Laos had the least number of cases. Indonesia is the second highest with the total 11. 396 cases. The table
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the quantity of
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that confirmed, death and recovered In three
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. Singapore and Indonesia
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The table
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that Jakarta had the highest number of confirmed and death
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, whereas East
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had the lowest total of
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in West
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was the least from the three other regions.
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