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The table below shows the population changes of several animal types from 1977 to 1990. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the population changes of several animal types from 1977 to 1990. GM3JB
The data provides information about the alternation of the number of wild animals through the period of 13 years starting from 1977. Overall, it is significant to note that all the species experienced a decline or even an extinction, only ostriches doubled in existence. In 1977, the sum of elephants comprised of around 1500 compared to rhinos, which were just sevenfold smaller than the former. From that point there was a steady rise in the quantity of elephants and the other beasts, however the first one and zebras recovered slightly during 1983. The giraffes represented the clear gradual decrease till the end of the period. Furthermore, there was a complete extinction of the rhinos after 1986. Interestingly, the sum of giraffes was half of the amount of the starting, which remains 2235 and then dropped to 1559. At the end the amount of zebras was much more than the other species including the quota of ostriches. It is worth to note that the ostriches are the single bodily, which revealed the increase in progeny. In the first 3 years it declined slowly, however then it increased to a record by 480. In the last year the total of ostriches dropped moderators from the highest point to 460.
The data provides information about the alternation of the number of wild animals through the period of 13 years starting from 1977.
Overall
, it is significant to note that all the species experienced a decline or even an extinction,
only
ostriches doubled in existence.

In 1977, the sum of elephants comprised of around 1500
compared
to rhinos, which were
just
sevenfold smaller than the former. From that point there was a steady rise in the quantity of elephants and the other beasts,
however
the
first
one and zebras recovered
slightly
during 1983. The giraffes represented the
clear
gradual decrease till the
end
of the period.
Furthermore
, there was a complete extinction of the rhinos after 1986.
Interestingly
, the sum of giraffes was half of the amount of the starting, which remains 2235 and then dropped to 1559. At the
end
the amount of zebras was much more than the other species including the quota of ostriches.

It is worth to note that the ostriches are the single
bodily
, which revealed the increase in progeny. In the
first
3 years it declined
slowly
,
however
then it increased to a record by 480. In the last year the total of ostriches dropped moderators from the highest point to 460.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the population changes of several animal types from 1977 to 1990.

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