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The given diagrams show the structural process of a wave energy machine and the costs related to different types of those machines based on their locations.

The given diagrams show the structural process of a wave energy machine and the costs related to different types of those machines based on their locations. 0Aal3
The first diagram pictures how a wave energy machine works and how electricity is generated. According to the diagram, the wave energy machine mainly works with a turbine that moves the water level from the surface and electricity is generated. Firstly, Air flows towards the water as the turbine starts moving which generates water waves and directs the water waves towards the machine and ultimately upwards. then the electricity is generated from the electricity generator section. Generally, based on locations, the diagram us showing two types waves in a wave energy appliance. The machine with large waves gives larger output than the one with small waves. But the installation cost of the wave energy machine located in the large wave area is higher than that located within the low wave area. So the drawback against more output is high cost. To conclude, a wave energy machine manipulates the water waves and produces electricity. Moreover, the more the waves, the more electricity is generated associated with a higher cost as a disadvantage.
The
first
diagram pictures how a
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wave
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energy
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machine
works and how
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electricity
is
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generated
. According to the diagram, the
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wave
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energy
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machine
mainly
works with a turbine that
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moves
the
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water
level from the surface and
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electricity
is
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generated
.
Firstly
, Air flows towards the
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water
as the turbine
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starts
moving which generates
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water
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waves
and directs the
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water
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waves
towards the
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machine
and
ultimately
upwards.
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then
the
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electricity
is
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generated
from the
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electricity
generator section.

Generally
, based on locations, the diagram us showing two types
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waves
in a
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wave
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energy
appliance. The
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machine
with large
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waves
gives larger output than the one with
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small
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waves
.
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But
the installation cost of the
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wave
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energy
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machine
located in the large
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wave
area is higher than that located within the low
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wave
area.
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So
the drawback against more output is high cost.

To conclude
, a
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wave
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energy
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machine
manipulates the
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water
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waves
and produces
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electricity
.
Moreover
, the more the
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waves
, the more
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electricity
is
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generated
associated with a higher cost as a disadvantage.
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IELTS academic The given diagrams show the structural process of a wave energy machine and the costs related to different types of those machines based on their locations.

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171 words
6.5
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