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The line chart illustrates the amount of money in US dollars paid on cars in China, Vietnam, Thailand, and Indonesia from the years 1995 until 2005.

The line chart illustrates the amount of money in US dollars paid on cars in China, Vietnam, Thailand, and Indonesia from the years 1995 until 2005. XG7lw
The line chart illustrates the amount of money in US dollars paid on cars in China, Vietnam, Thailand, and Indonesia for the years 1995 until 2005. Overall, the amount of money spent on cars in all four countries had increased. China had the highest amount over the entire period, while Indonesia started the lowest but dramatically increased. Thailand remained relatively stable over the given period. China spent within a range of around $80 million and just $90 million from 1995 to 2003, the largest amount of money spent on cars in all four countries. Vietnam placed the second-highest started at just above $50 million in 1995 and experienced a consistent increase year after year until 2005 to just above $70 million. Indonesia started the lowest, spent $30 million in 1995 and the amount had increased by around $10 million in 1999 to 2001 before a tremendous rise of just over $60 million and just above $70 million in 2003 and 2005, respectively. Thailand's expenses on cars shifted within the range of around $50 and just above $60 million from 1995 until 2005.
The line chart illustrates the
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of money in US dollars paid on
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in China, Vietnam, Thailand, and Indonesia for the years 1995 until 2005.

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, the
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of money
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cars
in all four countries had increased. China had the highest
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over the entire period, while Indonesia
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dramatically
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China
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within a range of around $80
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$90
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million
from 1995 to 2003, the largest
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amount
of money
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cars
in all four countries. Vietnam placed the second-highest
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started
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above
$50
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in 1995 and experienced a consistent increase year after year until 2005 to
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$70 million.

Indonesia
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the lowest,
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$30
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in 1995 and the
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had increased by around $10
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in 1999 to 2001
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before
a tremendous rise of
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over $60
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and
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$70
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in 2003 and 2005,
respectively
. Thailand's expenses on
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shifted within the range of around $50 and
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just
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above
$60
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million
from 1995 until 2005.
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