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The line graph illustrates the number of visitors to a particular island of Caribbean between the years 2010 and 2017.

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The line graph illustrates the number of visitors to a particular island of Caribbean between the years 2010 and 2017. Overall, the total visitor count rose significantly over the period of seven years. More people tend to stay in the cruise ships after 2016, while the number of people staying on the island went downward in the same year. Over the period of time, the total count of tourist increased steadily each year and reached the highest peak at 3. 5 millions of people in 2017. The number of visitors staying on the cruise ships fluctuated between 2012 and 2012. Then it witnessed a dramatically growth which surpassing the count of visitors stayed on the island after 2016. On the other hand, the figure shows a decline in number of visitors stay on the island that dropped under 1, 5 millions people and eventually ended at the same point again in 2017. Meanwhile, cruise ships passengers reached it highest point in 2017 of 2 million.
The line graph illustrates the
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visitors
to a particular
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island
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of Caribbean
between the years 2010 and 2017.

Overall
, the total
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visitor
count rose
significantly
over the period of seven years. More
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people
tend to stay in the cruise ships after 2016, while the
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number
of
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people
staying on the
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island
went downward in the same
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year
. Over the period of time, the total count of tourist increased
steadily
each
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year
and reached the highest peak at 3.
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5 millions of
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people
in 2017. The
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number
of
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visitors
staying on the cruise ships fluctuated between 2012 and 2012. Then it witnessed a
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dramatically growth
which surpassing the count of
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visitors
stayed on the
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island
after 2016.
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, the figure
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shows
a decline in
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number
of
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visitors
stay on the
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island
that dropped under 1, 5 millions
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people
and
eventually
ended at the same point again in 2017. Meanwhile, cruise ships passengers reached it
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highest
point in 2017 of 2 million.
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the number of visitors to a particular island of Caribbean between the years 2010 and 2017.

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