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The line graph illustrates the percentage of radio and television audiences in the United Kingdom from October to December in 1992.

The line graph illustrates the percentage of radio and television audiences in the United Kingdom from October to December in 1992. AJmon

The line graph illustrates the percentage of radio and television audiences in the United Kingdom from October to December in 1992. Overall, it can be seen that the television audiences had the highest proportion in the majority of given time of day or night. With regard to the rate of television used, it began at around 5% and then it was remained steady from 1 to 11 am. After, it slightly rose to nearly 15% in the time period of 11-13 am. Further, it dramatically increased to merely below than 45 percent. However, it significantly declined to nearly 15% in the end of the day. On the other hand, approximately 5% of the United Kingdom population were preferred the radio in the first hour and then remained steady in the next four hours and during the 11 to 12 am, it sharply inclined at almost 25% and then the figure was fluctuated marginally and dropped to 5% in the last hours of the day.

The line graph illustrates the percentage of radio and television audiences in the United Kingdom from October to December in 1992.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that the television audiences had the highest proportion in the majority of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 time of day or night.

With regard to the rate of television This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
, it began at around 5% and then it was remained
 steady from 1 to 11 am. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
, it slightly
 rose to nearly
 15% in the time period of 11-13 am. Further
, it dramatically
 increased to merely
 below than 45 percent. However
, it significantly
 declined to nearly
 15% in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the day.

On the other hand
, approximately 5% of the United Kingdom population were preferred
 the radio in the first
 hour and then remained steady in the next
 four hours and during the 11 to 12 am, it sharply
 inclined at almost 25% and then the figure was fluctuated
marginally
 and dropped to 5% in the last hours of the day. 