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The line graph illustrates the number of commuters using the underground station in London from 6.00 am to 22.00 pm.

The line graph illustrates the number of commuters using the underground station in London from 6. 00 am to 22. 00 pm. ArJOx
The line graph illustrates the number of commuters using the underground station in London from 6. 00 am to 22. 00 pm. Overall, it can be seen from the graph that the highest number of passengers is in a rush hour. Conversely, passengers travelling at other times in a day are much lower. Only 100 passengers get on the underground at 6. 00 am. This figure increases by 100 passengers at 7. 00 am before reaching the peak at 400 people at 8. 00 am. There is a considerable decline in the number of people using the subway after 8. 00 am, which is under 200 people at 10. 00 am. The number of commuters significantly increases to about 280 people at noon. The figures for people getting on the subway at 13. 00 pm and 14. 00 pm are nearly 290 people and 300 people respectively. This figure dramatically drops to the lowest in the graph, being 100 passengers at 16. 00 pm. There is a nearly 300-people increase in the commuters travelling by the subway from 16. 00 pm to 18. 00 pm, which is roughly 380 passengers. The number of people getting on the subway is under 150 people at 22. 00 pm after it experiences a fluctuation after 18. 00 pm.
The line graph illustrates the
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of commuters using the underground station in London from 6. 00 am to 22. 00 pm.

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, it can be
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seen
from the graph that the highest
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of
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passengers
is in a rush hour.
Conversely
,
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travelling at other times in a day are much lower.

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100
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passengers
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on the underground at 6. 00 am. This figure increases by 100
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passengers
at 7. 00 am
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before
reaching the peak at 400
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people
at 8. 00 am. There is a considerable decline in the
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number
of
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people
using the
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subway
after 8. 00 am, which is under 200
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at 10. 00 am. The
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of commuters
significantly
increases to about 280
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at noon.

The figures for
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getting on the
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at 13. 00 pm and 14. 00 pm are
nearly
290
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and 300
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respectively
. This figure
dramatically
drops to the lowest in the graph, being 100
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passengers
at 16. 00 pm. There is a
nearly
300-
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increase in the commuters travelling by the
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from 16. 00 pm to 18. 00 pm, which is roughly 380
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. The
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of
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people
getting on the
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is under 150
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at 22. 00 pm after it experiences a fluctuation after 18. 00 pm.
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the number of commuters using the underground station in London from 6. 00 am to 22. 00 pm.

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