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The line graph compared the volumn of oil manufactured and consumed in China over a 24-year-period

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The line graph compared the volumn of oil manufactured and consumed in China over a 24-year-period, starting from 1982. All figures are shown in millions of oil barrels per day. It can be seen that overall trend was upward. While the oil consumption experienced a significant increase to end the period with the top spot, the oil production demonstrated a slight growth. Turning to the detail, from 1982 to 1994, the number of oil manufactured was higher than that of oil consumed. The oil production stood at the first place at 2 million in the initial year, and then soared remarkably to nearly equal 3 million in 1986 before remaining almost stable. Beside that, there was a slight upturn in the figure for oil consumed from 1982 to 1990 around 2 million, shooting up suddenly to be equal to that of oil manufactured in 1994 From 1994 to 2006, upward patterns was still seen. Firstly, the oil consumption leaped continually to overcome the oil manufacturing, finishing at first placein 2006. Secondly, quantity of oil producted witnessed a gradual to peak at 3. 5 million in the final year.
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manufactured and consumed in China over a 24-year-period, starting from 1982. All figures
are shown
in
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millions
of
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oil
barrels per day.

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seen
that
overall
trend was upward. While the
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oil
consumption experienced a significant increase to
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end
the period with the top spot, the
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oil
production demonstrated a slight growth.

Turning to the detail, from 1982 to 1994, the number of
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oil
manufactured was higher than that of
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oil
consumed. The
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oil
production stood at the
first
place at 2
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million
in the initial year, and then soared
remarkably
to
nearly
equal 3
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million
in 1986
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before
remaining almost stable. Beside that, there was a slight upturn in the figure for
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oil
consumed from 1982 to 1990 around 2
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million
, shooting up
suddenly
to be equal to that of
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oil
manufactured in 1994

From 1994 to 2006, upward patterns was
still
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seen
.
Firstly
, the
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oil
consumption leaped
continually
to overcome the
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oil
manufacturing, finishing at
first
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placein
2006.
Secondly
, quantity of
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producted
witnessed a gradual to peak at 3. 5
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million
in the final year.
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IELTS academic The line graph compared the volumn of oil manufactured and consumed in China over a 24-year-period

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