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The chart shows men and women proficient in a foreign language in several countries.

The chart shows men and women proficient in a foreign language in several countries. R53VQ
This bar chart illustrates the percentage of males and females whom are fluent in a foreign language in six countries, Thailand, Romania, China, Vietnam, Russia, and India. The y-axis indicates the percentages from zero to 70% with intervals of 7%. Immediately, it is noticeable that a greater percentage of women speak a foreign language in all countries except for Thailand. As well, India and Romania have the highest total percentage of foreign language speakers. Looking at the data in greater detail, the biggest gap in foreign language ability between males and females is in Romania where roughly 20% more women speak a second or third language than men. In contrast, 5% more males in Thailand speak another language than women. Furthermore, the highest overall percentage of foreign language speakers are in India with 56% of men and 69% of women being able to speak in multiple languages. Following India and Romania, Vietnam has the third highest percentage of foreign language speakers at just over half of the population for females and over a third for males. In Russia, sightly less percent of men and women speak a foreign language as in Vietnam. Finally, the lowest percentage of foreign language speakers are in China. In summary, there is a wide range in the percent of people speaking a foreign language depending on nationality, and women are generally more than men
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language
in six countries, Thailand, Romania, China, Vietnam, Russia, and India. The y-axis indicates the
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percentages
from zero to 70% with intervals of 7%.

Immediately, it is noticeable that a greater
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percentage
of
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women
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in all countries
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Looking at the data in greater detail, the biggest gap in
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ability between
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and females is in Romania where roughly 20% more
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a second or third
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speakers are in India with 56% of
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and 69% of
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being able to
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speakers are in China.

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