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The line graph illustrates the causes of air polluation in the United kingdom from the year of 1990 to 2005.

The line graph illustrates the causes of air polluation in the United kingdom from the year of 1990 to 2005. dqkwX
The line graph illustrates the causes of air polluation in the United kingdom from the year of 1990 to 2005. Overall, it is noticeable from the graph that the rate of sources usage have decreased over the period given. According to what is shown, the total of air poullutants and households were more popular in 1990 accounting for just under 6 million tones and 7 million tones respectively. In contract, the industry and transport sources both had similar growth from the year of 1990 and 1993 representing 1 million and showed a slight increase over time. With regard to the total air pollutants, the figure depicted a dramatic decrease to 4 million tones, which, gradually fall just under the 4 million tones, before reaching at lowest point with approximate 3 million tones. Likewise, the industry air pollutants source steadily declined to 2 millions, whereas, households and transport had a similar trend in the last few years, where the number fluctuated reaching to a small rate around 1 million tones.
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and 7
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respectively
. In contract, the industry and transport sources both had similar growth from the year of 1990 and 1993 representing 1
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pollutants, the figure depicted a dramatic decrease to 4
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pollutants source
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the causes of air polluation in the United kingdom from the year of 1990 to 2005.

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