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the graph shows how many students were registered at Riverside School and Litchfield School in each or years from 2011 to 2014

the graph shows how many students were registered at Riverside School and Litchfield School in each or years from 2011 to 2014 11n7y
The line graph provides information on student enrollment at Riverside and Litchfield Schools from 2011 to 2015. The number of students at each school changed in the first four schools but did not increase or decrease in 2015. Student enrollment at Litchfield School increased steadily over the first four years and almost never decreased. From 2011 to 2013 there was a small increase in enrollment, about 200 students. Since then, enrollment has started to grow faster. In 2013, 1200 students enrolled at Litchfield School, and in 2014 enrollment was around 1450. Meanwhile, at Riverside School, almost all of the students were enrolled. decrease compared to the first year. There was a small increase between 2011 and 2012, enrollment increased by about 200 students. Starting in 2013, enrollment dropped to the same 800 students as at the beginning, plus, It dropped quite a bit in 2014, with around 600+ students. Overall, while enrollment changes every year at both schools, the number of students enrolled at Litchfield School increased significantly, while Riverside College did not receive many students.
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at Litchfield
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increased
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, about 200
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has
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to grow faster. In 2013, 1200
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enrolled at Litchfield
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, and in 2014
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was around 1450. Meanwhile, at Riverside
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increased by about 200
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dropped to the same 800
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as at the beginning, plus, It dropped quite a bit in 2014, with around 600+
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enrolled at Litchfield
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