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The charts below shot what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

The charts show what Uk graduate and post graduate students who didnot go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. There has generally been a big difference between graduates and postgraduates in 2008. What we can see from the charts that the percentage of further study among graduates and postgraduates is the highest. The only difference that the percentage of graduates is higher than post graduates. However, the number of students who did voluntary work is the smallest for graduates and postgraduates, which is almost one over ten compared with the number of further study. Lastly, the number of student whose destination is part-time work has sharpe difference compared with that of further study for graduates, while the number of students who did part-time work or chose further study for postgraduates is similar. Overall, though there was a sharpe difference between UK graduates and postgraduates in 2008, it can be calculated clearly that the order of its number is stable.
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IELTS academic The charts below shot what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

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