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The diagram below shows the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The linear process chart illustrates, the way in which are produce for the building industry. Overall, there are seven stages in the process of making bricks it is the beginning with the digging up of clay and concluding at delivery. During the initial stage clay is excavated out of land with the help of huge digger. Then, the clay is placed onto a metal grid full stop the metal grid is used to sieve the clay so that aggregates can be separated. After, water and sad are added to the clay to prepare raw material for bricks. In the subsequent stage, there are two process used to make brakes, one is a manual in which molding technique is used and the other one which wire cutting machine is an automatic process. Later on, this raw bricks are dried up in the drying oven for 1to 2 days to remove excess moisture. Then, the bricks are passed on to the kiln for moderate to high temperature followed by a cooling period of 2 to 3 days. The final step involves packing of bricks and transporting them through the trucks to various dealers throughout the country.

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process
 chart illustrates, the way in which are produce for the building industry. Overall
, there are seven stages in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 of making You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 it is the beginning with the digging up of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmudbrickearthterra cotta
clay
 and concluding at delivery.

During the initial stage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmudbrickearthterra cotta
clay
is excavated
 out of land with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of huge digger. Then, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmudbrickearthterra cotta
clay
is placed
 onto a metal grid full This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 the metal grid is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to sievePossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
the Use a comma before ‘so’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).clay,
clay
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that aggregates can be separated
. After, water and sad are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmudbrickearthterra cotta
clay
 to prepare raw material for bricks.

In the subsequent stage, there are two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 brakes, one is a manual in which molding technique is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 and the other one which wire cutting machine is an automatic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
. Later on, this raw You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
are dried
 up in the drying oven for 1to 2 days to remove excess moisture. Then, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
are passed
 on to the kiln for moderate to high temperature followed by a cooling period of 2 to 3 days.

The final step involves packing of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 and transporting them through the trucks to various dealers throughout the country. 