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The line graph illustrates the amount of power that consumes by fuel which are sources of nature at 10-year intervals between 1980 to 2030.

The line graph illustrates the amount of power that consumes by fuel which are sources of nature at 10-year intervals between 1980 to 2030. DoNym
The line graph illustrates the amount of power that consumes by fuel which are sources of nature at 10-year intervals between 1980 to 2030. Overall, it is obvious that almost these energies are going to go up. Notably, coal and natural gas tend to be similar to spend fuel. To begin with, solar use roughly 5 billion units in 1980 and gradually increased to 8 billion, However, this trend continues to increase approximately 10 in the future. In the same period, Nuclear seems to the same trend by consuming the energy, just only this power a bit higher, started about six and ended with 10 billion units. By contrast, natural gas and coal accounted for more of several using power. Meanwhile, gas begin at 20 billion and fluctuated for 30 years, then, it could be reached at about 28 billion units in 2030, coal which had eighteen billion total in the first, over the same term this energy had similar by spending fuel from 1990 to 2010, yet in the coming year coal significant rise and reach a peak at over 35. And the final was oil which had the most fluctuate also the factors consume the most fuel. This power was lower at 30 billion in 1990 that decreased by 4-5 billion compared at the beginning ( 35 billion). Although this energy had went up and down at the same time and continue increase at 50 billion units in 2030
The line graph illustrates the amount of
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power
that consumes by fuel which are sources of nature at 10-year intervals
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between 1980 to 2030
.

Overall
, it is obvious that almost these
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energies
are going to go up.
Notably
, coal and natural gas tend to be similar to spend fuel.

To
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begin
with, solar
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use
roughly 5
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billion
units in 1980 and
gradually
increased to 8
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billion
,
However
, this trend continues to increase approximately 10 in the future. In the same period, Nuclear seems to the same trend by consuming the
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energy
,
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just
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only
this
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power
a bit higher,
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started
about six and ended with 10
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billion
units.

By contrast, natural gas and coal accounted for more of several using
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power
. Meanwhile, gas
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begin
at 20
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billion
and fluctuated for 30 years, then, it could
be reached
at about 28
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billion
units in 2030, coal which had eighteen
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billion
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total
in the
first
, over the same term this
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energy
had similar by spending fuel from 1990 to 2010,
yet
in the coming year coal significant rise and reach a peak at over 35. And the final was oil which had the most fluctuate
also
the factors consume the most fuel. This
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power
was lower at 30
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billion
in 1990 that decreased by 4-5
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billion
compared at the beginning
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(
35
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billion)
. Although this
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energy
had
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went
up and down at the same time and continue increase at 50
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billion
units in 2030
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the amount of power that consumes by fuel which are sources of nature at 10-year intervals between 1980 to 2030.

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