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The line graph illustrates changes in the proportions of coffee exports from Brazil, Columbia, and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012.

The line graph illustrates changes in the proportions of coffee exports from Brazil, Columbia, and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. R5gl8
The line graph illustrates changes in the proportions of coffee exports from Brazil, Columbia, and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. Units are measured in millions of kilograms. Overall, it is noticeable that, despite some oscillations throughout the period, all three countries experienced a growth in their levels of exports. Costa Rica and Brazil were the most popular export countries. In 2002, the former started at 15 million kilograms, while the latter began at approximately 12 million. Afterward, the trend for Costa Rica halved to around 7. 5 million in 2006 as opposed to that of Brazil which consistently improved for the next 4 years. Following this, they both steadily ascended, ending up the period at 20 million ( Costa Rica ) and 25 million ( Brazil ) respectively. Columbia exports stood at 5 million kilograms in 2002. This figure increased gradually, and then surpassed that of Costa Rica, peaking at 12 million in 2006. Subsequently, Columbia witnessed a sharp decline which was followed by a steep surge, reaching 15 million exports in 2012.
The line graph illustrates
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changes
in the proportions of coffee
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exports
from Brazil, Columbia, and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. Units
are measured
in
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millions
of kilograms.

Overall
, it is noticeable that, despite
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some
oscillations throughout the period, all three countries experienced a growth in their levels of exports.

Costa Rica and Brazil were the most popular
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export
countries. In 2002, the former
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started
at 15
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million
kilograms, while the latter began at approximately 12
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million
. Afterward, the trend for Costa Rica halved to around 7. 5
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million
in 2006 as opposed to that of Brazil which
consistently
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improved
for the
next
4 years. Following this, they both
steadily
ascended, ending up the period at 20
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million
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(
Costa Rica
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and 25
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million
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Brazil
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respectively
.

Columbia
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exports
stood at 5
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million
kilograms in 2002. This figure increased
gradually
, and then surpassed that of Costa Rica, peaking at 12
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million
in 2006.
Subsequently
, Columbia witnessed a sharp decline which
was followed
by a steep surge, reaching 15
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million
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exports
in 2012.
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates changes in the proportions of coffee exports from Brazil, Columbia, and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012.

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