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The line graph illustrates changes in the proportions of coffee exports from Brazil, Columbia, and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012.

The line graph illustrates changes in the proportions of coffee exports from Brazil, Columbia, and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. R5gl8

The line graph illustrates changes in the proportions of coffee exports from Brazil, Columbia, and Costa Rica between 2002 and 2012. Units are measured in millions of kilograms. Overall, it is noticeable that, despite some oscillations throughout the period, all three countries experienced a growth in their levels of exports. Costa Rica and Brazil were the most popular export countries. In 2002, the former started at 15 million kilograms, while the latter began at approximately 12 million. Afterward, the trend for Costa Rica halved to around 7. 5 million in 2006 as opposed to that of Brazil which consistently improved for the next 4 years. Following this, they both steadily ascended, ending up the period at 20 million ( Costa Rica ) and 25 million ( Brazil ) respectively. Columbia exports stood at 5 million kilograms in 2002. This figure increased gradually, and then surpassed that of Costa Rica, peaking at 12 million in 2006. Subsequently, Columbia witnessed a sharp decline which was followed by a steep surge, reaching 15 million exports in 2012.

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some
 oscillations throughout the period, all three countries experienced a growth in their levels of exports.

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. Afterward, the trend for Costa Rica halved to around 7. 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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 in 2006 as opposed to that of Brazil which consistently
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respectively
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, and then surpassed that of Costa Rica, peaking at 12 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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 in 2006. Subsequently
, Columbia witnessed a sharp decline which was followed
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million
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exports
 in 2012. 