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This line graph compares to the differences in level of coffee exports spent by three countries (Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica) from the year 2002 to 2012, and is measured in milllions of kilograms.

This line graph compares to the differences in level of coffee exports spent by three countries (Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica) from the year 2002 to 2012, and is measured in milllions of kilograms. kb9RK
This line graph compares to the differences in level of coffee exports spent by three countries (Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica) from the year 2002 to 2012, and is measured in milllions of kilograms. Overall, despite some fluctuations, over the period as a whole, the proportions of exports rose in all countries. Costa Rica is the country which generated the coffee most in 2002, which was replaced by Brazil which was the best demand in final year. Likewise, Combalia went a similar pattern with Brazil and it stood at the least killograms at 5 millions in 2002, then rose steadily and hit the bottom point at approxmately 3millions in 2008, but while there was a dramatic climb in last year. The coffee exported from Brazil and Costa Rica which began at similar level between 12 and 15 million kilograms in 2002, but while Costa Rica saw a gradual decrease at around 8 million, then jumped steadily to 20 million kilograms of coffee exports over the late 4 years, followed by Brazil, exports from Brazil experienced significant climb, which peak at 20 million, to around 25 million. In summary, it is clear that there was no fall in Brazil and just only jumped over 10 years. However, they three followed similar trend, increasing steadily to 15 million which was lowest amount(Combalia), 20 million (Costa Rica) and 25 million which was the highest level(Brazi).
This line graph compares to the differences in level of
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spent by three countries (Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica) from the
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2002 to 2012, and
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milllions
of kilograms.
Overall
, despite
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fluctuations, over the period as a whole, the proportions of
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exports
rose in all countries. Costa Rica is the country which generated the
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coffee
most in 2002, which
was replaced
by Brazil which was the best demand in final
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year
.
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Combalia
went a similar pattern with Brazil and it stood at the least
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killograms
at 5
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millions
in 2002, then rose
steadily
and hit the bottom point at
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approxmately
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3millions
in 2008,
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while there was a dramatic climb in last
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year
. The
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coffee
exported from Brazil and Costa Rica which began at similar level between 12 and 15
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million
kilograms in 2002,
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while Costa Rica
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a gradual decrease at around 8
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million
, then jumped
steadily
to 20
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million
kilograms of
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exports
over the late 4 years, followed by Brazil,
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from Brazil experienced significant climb, which peak at 20
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million
, to around 25
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million
. In summary, it is
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clear
that there was no fall in Brazil and
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just
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only
jumped over 10 years.
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,
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they three
followed similar trend, increasing
steadily
to 15
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million
which was
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Combalia
), 20
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(Costa Rica) and 25
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which was the highest level(
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IELTS academic This line graph compares to the differences in level of coffee exports spent by three countries (Brazil, Colombia and Costa Rica) from the year 2002 to 2012, and is measured in milllions of kilograms.

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