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The line graph illustrates about the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions used per person in four different countries from 1967 to 2007, measured with metric tonnes.

The line graph illustrates about the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions used per person in four different countries from 1967 to 2007, measured with metric tonnes. X55P
The line graph illustrates about the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions used per person in four different countries from 1967 to 2007, measured with metric tonnes. Overall, the number of the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions used by people in the UK and Sweden decreased, when those the number of average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions in Italy and Portugal increased, the number of average carbon dioxide (CO2) emission used by people in the UK remains the highest. From 1967 to 1987, the number of the average CO2 emissions used by people in the UK and Sweden declined around 11 to 10 and approximately 8, 5 to 7 a part. However those of the average CO2 emissions in Italy and Portugal rose up from around 4 to 7 and around 1 to 3, 5. After 20 years, the number of the average CO2 emissions per person in the UK and Sweden dropped from 10 to 9 and around 7 to below 6 a piece. Although those of the average CO2 emissions in Italy and Portugal continues increase to hit a level of stability a ten year period about 7, 5 and 5, 5 tonnes.
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates about the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions used per person in four different countries from 1967 to 2007, measured with metric tonnes.

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