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in the last decade there has been a great increase in the number and varieties of online course available to adult this has been welcomed as a great opportunity by many students have our other students with these courses are less effective than classroom teaching what are the advantages and disadvantages of studying online courses

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It is a irrefutable to say that nowadays technology improve every field including education sector by adapting online mode of learning. A group of people assert that it provides a wide range of courses to students while, others believe that online teaching is much effective. In further paragraphs I would cast light on pros and cons related to the conception. To embark on, there are multifarious benefits of online classes. First of all, it save money in many ways such as travelling cost from home to school and accommodation and other living expenses. In simple words, learner can stay at home that may save a lot of money. Secondly, the most prominent thing is that youngsters able to study according to schedule and induce more flexibility in time table and able to control on more task due to access on time. In addition to it, adults easily makes an effective use of time for studies online as well as for other works. For example, international students able to land curriculum by distance learning along with their huge amount of fund. On the other hand, some of students concerned about their education because it is less effective. Firstly, it reduces face-to-face interaction between learners and teacher so that they are less attentive and less focused on studies. Consequently, sometimes it is unable to operate laboratory via online and practical subject. Last but not the least, it is not much effective as come paired to online classes because it is unappropriate and less determined by scholars. To elaborate the same there is an epitome of medical field of students who are unable to attend e-Learning because there is a great practical knowledge and skill required. To recapitulate, in some variety of test it can be applicable but not for all different kind of courses although, it has various benefits outweigh the demerits in view of its undeniable favourable outcomes.
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every field including education sector by adapting
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online
mode of learning. A group of
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people
assert that it provides a wide range of courses to
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students
while, others believe that
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online
teaching is much
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effective
. In
further
paragraphs I would cast light on pros and cons related to the conception. To embark on, there are multifarious benefits of
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online
classes.
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money.
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, the most prominent thing is that youngsters able to study according to schedule and induce more flexibility in time table and able to control on more task due to access on time.
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attentive and
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focused on studies.
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sometimes
it is unable to operate laboratory via
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online
and practical subject. Last
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unappropriate
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students
who are unable to attend e-Learning
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because
there is a great practical knowledge and
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it can be applicable
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IELTS academic in the last decade there has been a great increase in the number and varieties of online course available to adult this has been welcomed as a great opportunity by many students have our other students with these courses are less effective than classroom teaching what are the advantages and disadvantages of studying online courses

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