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The bar chart illustrates the breakdown between Australian men and women doing regular physical activity in 2010 with percentage.

The bar chart illustrates the breakdown between Australian men and women doing regular physical activity in 2010 with percentage. wqLE

The bar chart illustrates the breakdown between Australian men and women doing regular physical activity in 2010 with percentage. Those in their twenties and sixties have less than a half of male doing exercise activity, while the range of female in the ages between thirties and sixties act physical training stand at above a half and becoming the highest. Those aged between 15 and 44 for Male decreased from 52, 8 to 39, 5%, if compared with female it tended to increase about 5%. In the ages of 15 to 24 at both genders had slightly different to 5% in which male got the biggest proportion from that. However, in the next ages female made up above 50% at 35-44 age. 53, 3% of female in the age of 45 to 54 doing regular physical activity, and the percentage fell to 53% before declining to hit a lowest level at 47, 1% in the age of 65 and over. In contrast with the same as age as female, male preferred to increase slightly to finish at 46% at the 65 and over. Overall, the majority of the percentage is women for doing regular physical activities, while male in the smallest except in the age of fifteen to twenty-four.

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