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These two Maps illustrate changes occured to a final path leads to a city hospital in diffent two years.

These two Maps illustrate changes occured to a final path leads to a city hospital in diffent two years. q2Wr
These two Maps illustrate changes occured to a final path leads to a city hospital in diffent two years. Overrely, the new differences happened in order to fix many issues for clients and Staffs in case of being crowded. Newer constructions and changing some necessary spaces’ location are seen for this reason. These two pictures show some changes happened between 2007 and 2010. There are two round about, one located on the crossroad and the second is placed at the end the hospital wrote by removing some of hospital’s area. Bus stations has been demolished and located on the two sides of the Hospital road. The joint public and staff parking is now exclusively for stuffs and the public parking is constructed it on the right side of the hospital with a new entrane.
These two Maps illustrate
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to a final path leads to a city
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. Newer constructions and changing
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necessary spaces’ location are
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These two pictures
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happened between 2007 and 2010. There are two round about, one located on the crossroad and the second
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end
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wrote by removing
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hospital’s
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been demolished
and located on the two sides of the
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Hospital
road. The joint public and staff parking is
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exclusively for stuffs and the public parking
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IELTS academic These two Maps illustrate changes occured to a final path leads to a city hospital in diffent two years.

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