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Chart gives information about the purpose of visits to five cities in uk in 2013

Chart gives information about the purpose of visits to five cities in uk in 2013 6AAr
The bar chart compares the information about the purpose of visit in five cities in 2013 UK. While in the figure it shows the purpose of holiday visit is highest in Edinburgh and the miscellaneous purpose is lowest. In Edinburgh it is about 65%of visitors vist the city for holiday and next stands london is 50%, liverpool is about 32%. In Birmingham the purpose of bussiness vist is highest of 49%, next stands Manchester is about 32%. Visiting friends and relatives is highest in city of Liverpool is about 29%. Among the all five cities the most vist for holiday is in Edinburgh, lowest was abput 45%less in liverpool. In purpose for bussiness the highest vist is in Birmingham is about 49% and lowest is about 39% less in Edinburgh. The vist for friends is more in london compare to other cities in UK. On the otherhand the purpose for miscellaneous vist is highest in liverpool and lowest is in Edinburgh.
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