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The line graph highlights three types of human consumption of spreads, which were margarine, low fat and reduced spreads, and butter, consumed between 1981 and 2007.

The line graph highlights three types of human consumption of spreads, which were margarine, low fat and reduced spreads, and butter, consumed between 1981 and 2007. 8AjP
The line graph highlights three types of human consumption of spreads, which were margarine, low fat and reduced spreads, and butter, consumed between 1981 and 2007. Overall, consuming of low fat and reduced spreads became the highest one comparing to the other two of consumptions. In 1981 the most swallowed type of consumption was butter, with an amount of approximately 140 grams while the usage of margarine was about 50 grams lower. Consuming butter started to decrease slightly while margarine became more popular in 1986. Usage of both margarine and butter became equal in 1991 by the grams of 100. Afterwards, the consumption of butter began to fall dramatically and finished its usage below 60 grams by the year of 2007. However, swallowing the margarine stayed stable over some years, then showed the significant drop with an amount of 40 grams in 2007. Although the consumption of low fat and reduced spread was not familiar until 1996, it was consumed by humans by the amount of 10 grams, which became popular among people afterwards. Its usage started to increase dramatically with amounts of 80 grams in 2001 and by slight drop it became about 70 grams and was still popular comparing to other consumption spreads.
The line graph highlights three types of human
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spreads
, which were
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margarine
, low
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fat
and
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reduced
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spreads
, and
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butter
, consumed between 1981 and 2007.

Overall
, consuming of low
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fat
and
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reduced
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spreads
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became
the highest one comparing to the other two of
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consumptions
.

In 1981 the most swallowed type of
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consumption
was
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butter
, with an
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amount
of approximately 140
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grams
while the
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usage
of
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margarine
was about 50
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grams
lower. Consuming
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butter
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started
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slightly
while
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margarine
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became
more popular in 1986.
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of both
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margarine
and
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butter
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became
equal in 1991 by the
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grams
of 100. Afterwards, the
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consumption
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butter
began to fall
dramatically
and finished its
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usage
below 60
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grams
by the year of 2007.
However
, swallowing the
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margarine
stayed stable over
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some
years, then
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showed
the significant drop with an
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amount
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grams
in 2007.

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fat
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reduced
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spread
was not familiar until 1996, it
was consumed
by humans by the
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amount
of 10
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grams
, which
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became
popular among
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people
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usage
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started
to increase
dramatically
with
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amounts
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grams
in 2001 and by slight drop it
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became
about 70
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grams
and was
still
popular comparing to other
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consumption
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spreads
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IELTS academic The line graph highlights three types of human consumption of spreads, which were margarine, low fat and reduced spreads, and butter, consumed between 1981 and 2007.

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