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The table compares 4 countries by the different indicators

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The table illustrates the four different states situations in four indicators. Overall, Canada is in the first place of daily calorie supply per person while Japan has the first place two times: annual income per person and life expectancy at birth. Whereas Peru with Angola have dates which are lower than mid. Canada beside Japan illustrate almost 100% in adult literacy rate, in contrast, Peru along with Angola still have only 68% and 34% respectively. Japan beside Canada together have mid-life length results nearly 80 ages, whereas Angola along with Peru have this indicator almost(47 ages) and a little more than(51years) 50 years old respectively. In per year profit for one person category Japan has the best indicator with a handicap to other countries which are in comparison. Canada shows not worst result at this indicator, which is a little more than 11000 since has a leadership position, while approximately equal 3300 in per day calorie supply for one human, at that time Japan only has a number of it, nearly 3000 calories per day. Angola and Peru in this stage have dates a little more than 1700 calories per day.
The table illustrates the four
different
states situations in four indicators.

Overall
, Canada is in the
first
place of daily calorie supply per person while
Japan
has the
first
place two times: annual income per person and life expectancy at birth.
Whereas
Peru with Angola have dates which are lower than mid.

Canada beside
Japan
illustrate almost 100% in adult literacy rate,
in contrast
, Peru along with Angola
still
have
only
68% and 34%
respectively
.
Japan
beside Canada together have mid-life length results
nearly
80 ages, whereas Angola along with Peru have this indicator almost(47 ages) and a
little
more than(51years) 50 years
old
respectively
.

In per year profit for one person category
Japan
has the best indicator with a handicap to other countries which are
in comparison
. Canada
shows
not
worst
result at this indicator, which is a
little
more than 11000 since has a leadership position, while approximately equal 3300 in per day calorie supply for one human, at that time
Japan
only
has a number of it,
nearly
3000 calories per day. Angola and Peru in this stage have dates a
little
more than 1700 calories per day.
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