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The line graph gives infornation about for daily travel by people in the specific country which used by car , bus or train between 1970 and 2030

The line graph gives infornation about for daily travel by people in the specific country which used by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030 JomW6
The line graph gives infornation about for daily travel by people in the specific country which used by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030 It is clear that people used by car for travelling and this transport is by far the most popular in UK throughout the period shown. While people using by car and train increase the number of bus was deacresing slowly In 1970 roughly 3. 5 million UK commuters travelled by bus for daily basis. While train and car were using by about 4 million and 2 million people for travelling. Between 1980 and 1990, the number of bus was dropped by workers in GREAT BRETIAN. in 2030 aproximitaly 3 million people will use by bus. The number of car rising dramatically from 5 million in 1980 to about 7 million in 2000. Between 2000 and 2020 this number jumped 8 million people. End of the year namely 2030 9 million workers will travel by car in UK.
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for travelling and this transport is by far the most popular in UK throughout the period shown. While
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and train increase the
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UK commuters travelled by bus for daily basis. While train and
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were using by about 4
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and 2
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for travelling. Between 1980 and 1990, the
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IELTS academic The line graph gives infornation about for daily travel by people in the specific country which used by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030

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