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Bar Chart Owned and Rented Households

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The following diagram drives from a bar chart which illustrates the percentage of people in owned and rented accommodation in London since 1918 to 2011. The general perspective finds that, Maximum number of people in London used to live on a rental basis in the early 90s period afterwards slowly people started moving to their own accommodation from the mid century. Looking at the details, 78% of people used to live on a rental basis from the year 1918 to 1939 which slightly got reduced after 20 years by 10%, However percentage of people living in the rental basis remained almost the same for the next 13 years and then a steady drop in the rental system from 50% to 30% from the period 1971 to 2001 can be easily seen in the chart. In a like manner to the previous points, while for percentage of people with their own accommodation has shown a gradual raise of 50% from the year 1918 to 2001. Secondly, in the year 1971 the percentage of people with their own house and rented house was equal. In a conclusion, the trend for both of the owners and renters is reciprocally changed from the year 1918 to 2011.
The following diagram drives from a bar chart which illustrates the
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in
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and rented accommodation in London since 1918 to 2011.

The general perspective finds that, Maximum number of
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people
in London
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on a
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rental
basis in the early 90s period afterwards
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people
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started
moving to their
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own
accommodation from the mid century.

Looking at the
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details
, 78% of
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people
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used
to
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live
on a
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rental
basis from the
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year
1918 to 1939 which
slightly
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got
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reduced
after 20 years by 10%,
However
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of
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people
living in the
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rental
basis remained almost the same for the
next
13 years and then a steady drop in the
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rental
system from 50% to 30% from the period 1971 to 2001 can be
easily
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seen
in the chart.

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to the previous points, while for
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with their
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own
accommodation has shown a gradual raise of 50% from the
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year
1918 to 2001.
Secondly
, in the
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year
1971 the
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of
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with their
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house
and rented
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house
was equal.

In a conclusion, the trend for both of the owners and renters is
reciprocally
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changed
from the
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year
1918 to 2011.
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IELTS academic Bar Chart Owned and Rented Households

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6.0
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