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The line graph gives information about the number of customers in Borderline bookshop over the six-month period.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph gives information about the number of customers in Borderline bookshop over the six-month period. E3MY3
The statistics in the line graph demonstrate the changes in the number of sales in Borderline bookshop over a period of 6 months starting from April. In general, a rapid increase can be seen in the number of customers visiting the shop although there were wild fluctuations throughout the period. The starting three months were apparently not profitable for the shop since there were visibly fewer customers then than in the second three months. At the beginning of April, 800 people came to the store to purchase books before Their total grew slowly by 200. However, the sales reversed in June because there was a marginal decline of 100, which brought the number down to 900. July was marked with the largest change of the period. In this month? the customer number to Borderline doubled and had reached 1800 by the end of the month. In August, 200 fewer visitors bought books from the shop, but their total hit a new peak of well over 1900 at the end of the period. Overall, the latter half of the period was more successful for the shop than the former half.
The statistics in the line graph demonstrate the
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changes
in the
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number
of sales in Borderline bookshop over a period of 6
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months
starting from April.
In general
, a rapid increase can be
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seen
in the
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number
of customers visiting the
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shop
although there were wild fluctuations throughout the period.

The starting three
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months
were
apparently
not profitable for the
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shop
since there were
visibly
fewer customers then than in the second three
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months
. At the beginning of
When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "April 800".
April, 800
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people
came to the store to
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purchase
books
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before
Their total grew
slowly
by 200.
However
, the sales reversed in June
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because
there was a marginal decline of 100, which brought the
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number
down to 900. July
was marked
with the largest
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change
of the period. In this
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month
?
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the
customer
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number
to Borderline doubled and had reached 1800 by the
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end
of the
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month
. In
When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "August 200".
August, 200
fewer visitors
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bought
books from the
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shop
,
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but
their total hit a new peak of well over 1900 at the
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end
of the period.

Overall
, the latter half of the period was more successful for the
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shop
than the former half.
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IELTS academic The line graph gives information about the number of customers in Borderline bookshop over the six-month period.

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