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The graph compares employment of the economy in the UK 2000-2010

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 the process of making or growing gas to be sold
especially
 in large quantities in 2003-2008 in Possible spelling mistake found.RussianRussiaRussiansHussiteRusticateRussianize
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 graph This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 the condition of number in three sectors of the economy between 10 years in the UK

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clear
 to the condition of having a paid job number economy in the UK raised slowly
 in 10years by public sector and self-employed. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 by private sector it was upward rapidly
. 