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Carbonated drinks process

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This process depicts to making carbonated drink. It is clear from the graph that describe the carbonatd drinks. According to what is shown stage 1 it is the important stage begin from cleaning raw the water and cleaning by filter, softener and chemicals. Between this stage pump water. Stage 2 cooling pipe the water electtric machin, carbon dioxide and then send it to stage 3. Stage 1and 2 describe the level out process. Stege 3 mixing tank 3 step colouring, sytrup and flavour. Stage 4 just 2 step first filtering and second filling the bottles or cans to the final distnatio. Stage 5 final step packaging to the supermarket or home. To sum up, we could say that the process between trends and anomalies. Water machine change from remain steady to increase.
This process depicts to making carbonated drink. It is
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clear
from the graph that
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describe
the
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carbonatd
drinks.

According to what
is shown
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stage
1 it is the
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important
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stage
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begin
from cleaning raw the
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water
and cleaning by filter, softener and chemicals. Between this
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stage
pump
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water
.
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Stage
2 cooling pipe the
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water
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electtric
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machin
, carbon dioxide and then
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send
it to
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stage
3.
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Stage
1and 2
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describe
the level out process.

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Stege
3 mixing tank
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3 step
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colouring
,
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sytrup
and
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flavour
.
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Stage
4
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just
2 step
first
filtering and second filling the bottles or cans to the final
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distnatio
.
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Stage
5 final step packaging to the supermarket or home.

To sum up, we could say that the process between trends and anomalies.
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Water
machine
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change
from remain steady to increase.

IELTS academic Carbonated drinks process

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
132 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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