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The line graph gives information about how many enquiries received by Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period from January to June in 2011

The line graph gives information about how many enquiries received by Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period from January to June in 2011 EwDqr
The line graph gives information about how many enquiries received by Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period from January to June in 2011 Overall, while the numbers of enquirement by telephone and person increased, the figue of enquiries received by letter/email gradually decreased over the period. In addition, another striking feature was the highest figure among three types in June. In January, while nearly 400 people chose type “face to face” to require, the number of people chose types letter/email and telephone were higher, at about 780 and 900 respectively. The March saw a dramatic rose of 400 enquiries in person and the number of traveller require by telephone reached 1000. However, a slightly drop of approximately 100 in the figure of require by letter/email. Also, the number of require in person and require by telephone significant rise to reach nearly 1900 and 1600 respectively. By contrast the figure of traveller require by letter/mail remarkable fall reached about 390.
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received by Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period from January to June in 2011

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and person increased, the
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were higher, at about 780 and 900
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. The March
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a dramatic rose of 400
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enquiries
in person and the
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by
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reached 1000.
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, a
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of approximately 100 in the figure of
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by letter/email.

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in person and
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significant rise to reach
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by letter/mail remarkable fall reached about 390.
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IELTS academic The line graph gives information about how many enquiries received by Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period from January to June in 2011

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