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The line graph gives information about a European country’s consumption

The line graph gives information about a European country’s consumption a7dR9

The line graph gives information about a European country’s consumption of fish and various kinds of meat, namely chicken, beef and lamb from 1979 to 2004 Overall, the taste of consumers mostly changed owing to the graph. All kinds of meat were fluctuated over the period while fish remained stable. Chicken consumption hit the peak at the end of the period, in contrast, consumed beef decreased dramatically the last year. Chicken and lamb nearly was in the same quantity, about 150 gr per person in a week. However chicken significantly increased during the years and it was almost 250 gr in 2004. Lamb observed slowly falling to approximately 60gr. People preferred beef meat more to the other kinds at the beginning of the period. Hence, it showed the most significant decreasing and hit the bottom of 100 gr. By contrast, fish was the least consumed one throughout all of the given years

The line graph gives information about a European country’s consumption of fish and various kinds of meat, namely
 chicken, beef and lamb from 1979 to 2004

Overall
, the taste of consumers mostly
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 owing to the graph. All kinds of meat were fluctuated
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end
 of the period, in contrast
, consumed beef decreased dramatically
 the last year.

Chicken and lamb nearly
 was in the same quantity, about 150 gr per person in a week. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 chicken significantly
 increased during the years and it was almost 250 gr in 2004. Lamb observed slowly
 falling to approximately 60gr.

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People
 preferred beef meat more to the other kinds at the beginning of the period. Hence
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showed
 the most significant decreasing and hit the bottom of 100 gr. By contrast, fish was the least consumed one throughout Consider using "all the".all the
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