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The bar chart shows the percentage of Iceland population between 1990 and 2020 with 10 years interval based on age groups.

The bar chart shows the percentage of Iceland population between 1990 and 2020 with 10 years interval based on age groups. o5nEw
The most noticeable trend is the 25 – 54 age group which increased greatly over the period. On the other hand, the 2 younger groups, which are the 0 – 14 age group and the 15 – 24 age group, are constantly decreasing. The 2 older groups, which are the 55 – 64 age group and the 65 and over age group remained steady throughout the years. The 25 – 54 age group grew to almost half of Iceland population in 2020 from only a third of it in the 1990. This trend keep the 25 – 54 age group with the biggest population compared to other groups. The 0 – 14 age group steadily decreased from around 25% of population in 1990 to less than 20% in 2020, but it remained as the group with the second biggest population throughout the year. The 15 – 24 age group also steadily decreased over the period, but the decrement is more than 50% from the initial population in 1990. It decreased from more than 20% of population in 1990 to less than 10% in 2020, made it as the age group with the lowest population in 2020. On the contrary, the other 2 older group remained stable with the 65 and over group is at 10 – 15% of population throughout the period, while the 55 – 64 age group is around 10%.
The most noticeable trend is the 25 – 54
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which increased
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, which are the 0 – 14
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and the 15 – 24
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, are
constantly
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, which are the 55 – 64
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and the 65 and
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age
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remained steady throughout the years.

The 25 – 54
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grew to almost half of Iceland
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in 2020 from
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a third of it in the 1990. This trend
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the 25 – 54
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with the biggest
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compared to other groups.

The 0 – 14
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steadily
decreased from around 25% of
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in 1990 to less than 20% in 2020,
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it remained as the
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with the second biggest
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throughout the year. The 15 – 24
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also
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decreased
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the decrement is more than 50% from the initial
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population
in 1990. It decreased from more than 20% of
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in 1990 to less than 10% in 2020, made it as the
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with the lowest
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in 2020.

On the contrary
, the other 2 older
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remained stable with the 65 and
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is at 10
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15% of
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throughout the period, while the 55 – 64
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is around 10%.
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