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The chart below gives the information about the percentage of fast food ate by people in Melbourne in 2005 and present Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table depicts the information about the proportion of junk food that was eaten by the individuals of Melbourne between 2005 and in the present year. After analyzing, it can be seen clearly that consumption of hamburgers is almost identical in past and present year by the people of Melbourne. However, 35% of fried chicken was eaten by the masses in 2005, whilst consumption of fried chicken is 2% more than 2005 in present days. The table further collates that people of Melbourne ate 5% of salads in 2005, whereas in the present year, there is a sharp increase of 10% in the consumption of food. In contrast, negligible difference can be seen in the percentile of fried rice which was eaten by individuals. There is lowest consumption of noodles in the given years. Overall, eating of hamburgers was maximum in the terms of fast food, whilst noodles had minimum consumption in the given time period.
The table depicts the information about the proportion of junk food that
was eaten
by the individuals of Melbourne between 2005 and in the
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present
year.

After analyzing, it can be
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seen
clearly
that
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consumption
of hamburgers is almost identical in past and
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present
year by the
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people
of Melbourne.
However
, 35% of fried chicken
was eaten
by the masses in 2005, whilst
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consumption
of fried chicken is 2% more than 2005 in
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present
days.

The table
further
collates that
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people
of Melbourne ate 5% of salads in 2005, whereas in the
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present
year, there is a sharp increase of 10% in the
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consumption
of food.
In contrast
, negligible difference can be
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seen
in the percentile of fried rice which
was eaten
by individuals. There is
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lowest
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consumption
of noodles in the
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given
years.

Overall
, eating of hamburgers was maximum in the terms of
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fast
food, whilst noodles had minimum
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consumption
in the
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given
time period.
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IELTS academic The chart below gives the information about the percentage of fast food ate by people in Melbourne in 2005 and present

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