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Energy used in average Australian Household

Energy used in average Australian Household 9B95X
The pie chart provides information about how much energy is consumed in an average Australian household purpose and illustrates the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions that occur from this energy usages. Inclusively, two-third of the household energy is used in the main two sources are water heating and heating, and the rest of the things happens from other sources. Furthermore, half of the greenhouse gas emissions occur from the foremost two energy uses. The largest household energy uses in in heating and the second one is from water heating. These two elements’ control the biggest uses in a typical Australian household. Heating occurs 42% whereas water heating happens in 30%. Lighting, cooling, and refrigeration use only 4%, 2%, and 7%. Rest only 15% ensues from other household appliances. The maximum greenhouse gas emissions happen mostly from water heating and other appliances. Water heating holds 32% of the chart and other appliances grips 28%. Heating is another big source of gas emissions and it takes 15% of the chart. Cooling, lighting, refrigeration is the most common sources of greenhouse gas emissions and these things hold the rest of the percentage.
The pie chart provides information about how much
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energy
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in an average Australian
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purpose and illustrates the percentage of
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greenhouse
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gas
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emissions
that occur from this
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usages.

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in a typical Australian
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happens in 30%. Lighting, cooling, and refrigeration
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4%, 2%, and 7%. Rest
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15% ensues from
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Water
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holds 32% of the chart and
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and these things hold the rest of the percentage.
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IELTS academic Energy used in average Australian Household

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