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writing task 1 truck produce in asia

writing task 1 truck produce in asia 2Kr7A
The table illustrated how many trucks were manufactured in four nations in Asia throughout ten years period starting from 2005. In general, it is obvious that Vietnam and Thailand witnessed a marked growth in the figure of trucks over the period, whereas Malaysia and Indonesia showed an opposite reserve pattern in trucks manufacturing It is as seen as apparently from the table, Thailand is always the leader of trucks maker. There were 600, 000 vehicles produced in Thailand in 2005 which was followed by a sharp roe to 1, 189, 000 in 2010 and then significantly fell into 850, 000 in 2015. As regarding Vietnam, although this nation stated the period with a small quantity of just 170, 000 trucks which ranked the third in the list, a constant rose can be observed over the next years turning it into the second position after the neighborhood, Thailand with 600, 000 by 2015 The other two countries, Malaysia and Indonesia in contrast, underwent a striking downward trend in truck production. The first five years of timeline, however, observed a steeply dropped by 180, 000 units in Malaysiawrign
The table illustrated how
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were manufactured
in four nations in Asia throughout ten years period starting from 2005.
In general
, it is obvious that Vietnam and Thailand witnessed a marked growth in the figure of
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trucks
over the period, whereas Malaysia and Indonesia
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showed
an opposite reserve pattern in
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trucks
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manufacturing


It is as
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seen
as
apparently
from the table, Thailand is always the leader of
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trucks
maker. There were 600, 000 vehicles produced in Thailand in 2005 which
was followed
by a sharp roe to 1, 189, 000 in 2010 and then
significantly
fell into 850, 000 in 2015. As regarding Vietnam, although this nation stated the period with a
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small
quantity of
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just
170, 000
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trucks
which ranked the third in the list, a constant rose can
be observed
over the
next
years turning it into the second position after the neighborhood, Thailand with 600, 000 by 2015

The other two countries, Malaysia and Indonesia
in contrast
, underwent a striking downward trend in
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truck
production. The
first
five years of timeline,
however
, observed a
steeply
dropped by 180, 000 units in
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Malaysiawrign
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IELTS academic writing task 1 truck produce in asia

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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