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The line graph elucidates daily electricity consumption in England in winter and summer season, while, the pre chart illustrates the proportion of power wage by different equipment in a typical household of the same country.

The line graph elucidates daily electricity consumption in England in winter and summer season, while, the pre chart illustrates the proportion of power wage by different equipment in a typical household of the same country. Wy31k
The line graph elucidates daily electricity consumption in England in winter and summer season, while, the pre chart illustrates the proportion of power wage by different equipment in a typical household of the same country. In detail, energy used during the summer season reach upto reaches up to 20000 units two times in a day, especially after mid-noon and by midnight. However, electricity requirement in the winter fluctuated starting from more than 30000 units at midnight, furthermore, peaking after 2100 hours to almost 50000 units. Probing further, more than half of the current is used for heating rooms and water, followed by ovens, kettles and washing machine machines with a share of 17. 5%. Rest 30% of energy is equally divided for lighting, TV and radio in addition to vaccum vacuum cleaners, food mixers and electric tools. Overall, maximum energy is needed in the winter period and it is mainly consumed for heating rooms and water.
The line graph elucidates daily electricity consumption in England in winter and summer season, while, the
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chart illustrates the proportion of power wage by
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equipment in a typical household of the same country.

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the summer season
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reaches up to 20000 units two times in a day,
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after mid-noon and by midnight.
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, electricity requirement in the winter fluctuated starting from more than 30000 units at midnight,
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, peaking after 2100 hours to almost 50000 units.

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used
for heating rooms and water, followed by ovens, kettles and washing machine machines with a share of 17. 5%. Rest 30% of energy is
equally
divided for lighting, TV and radio
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vaccum
vacuum cleaners, food mixers and electric tools.

Overall
, maximum energy
is needed
in the winter period and it is
mainly
consumed for heating rooms and water.
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IELTS academic The line graph elucidates daily electricity consumption in England in winter and summer season, while, the pre chart illustrates the proportion of power wage by different equipment in a typical household of the same country.

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