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The line graph provides information of tourist preference to stay

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The line graph elucidate information regarding travellers preference to stay while they visit in caribbean island from 2000 -2017. At a cursory glance, the total number of visitors was increased significantly in a given period of time. In 2010, around 0. 7 million tourists liked to stay in Carribean island, whereas just. 25 million stayed in cruise ship. Carribean island witnessed a considerable growth until 2013 when the figure was 1. 5 million. From then, the figure remained stable until the mid of 2015. After which, the number of tourists declined for the stay in island and slightly increased at reached to previous figure of 1. 5 in 2017. Regarding the preference towards cruise ship was skyrocketed over the period of time. Even though this saw some fluctuation in the first two years, from 0. 25 million, then it started to grow sharply and hit a figure as same as Carribean island in 2015 at nearly 1. 5 million and the figure was overturned the same a year and hit a all time of high in 2017 at 2 million.
The line graph elucidate information regarding
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travellers
preference to stay while they visit in
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caribbean
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island
from 2000 -2017.

At a cursory glance, the total number of visitors
was increased
significantly
in a
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given
period of time.

In 2010, around 0. 7
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million
tourists liked to stay in
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Carribean
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island
, whereas
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. 25
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million
stayed in cruise ship.
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Carribean
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island
witnessed a considerable growth until 2013 when the
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figure
was 1. 5
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million
. From then, the
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figure
remained stable until the mid of 2015. After which, the number of tourists declined for the stay in
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island
and
slightly
increased at reached to previous
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figure
of 1. 5 in 2017.

Regarding the preference towards cruise ship
was skyrocketed
over the period of time.
Even though
this
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some
fluctuation in the
first
two years, from 0. 25
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million
, then it
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started
to grow
sharply
and hit a
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as same as
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Carribean
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island
in 2015 at
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1. 5
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million
and the
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was overturned
the same a year and hit
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