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the graph and table show the water consumption in two different countries.

the graph and table show the water consumption in two different countries. 2bWlk
The line graph illustrates a survey on the amount of water was used in the whole world in years 1900 and 2000. Hence, the table demonstrates the proportions of consuming water and compares 3 main factors between Brazil and Democratic Republic Congo. It is noticeable that agriculture was by far the most significant means of using water and domestic use provided the lowest amount each decade. Additionally, the water consumed in Brazil is much more than another country. As the graph suggestion, in 1990, agriculture was the main source of consuming water, utilizing close to 3000 km whereas the others used water just under 1000 km each. For the whole 100-year periods, the figures for agriculture saw a dramatic rise while industry and domestic approximately remained stable by 1940 and then increased gradually over the period shown. According the table, the various and significant factors serve an important function in comparing two countries in 2000. Brazil has more population, roughly 176 million, than Democratic Republic Congo and water consumption for both countries were 359 m and 8 m respectively. Given this issue, eventually, the irrigated land in Brazil was clearly much more than another.
The line graph illustrates a survey on the amount of
water
was
used
in the whole world in years 1900 and 2000.
Hence
, the table demonstrates the proportions of consuming
water
and compares 3 main factors between Brazil and Democratic Republic Congo. It is noticeable that agriculture was by far the most significant means of using
water
and domestic
use
provided the lowest amount each decade.
Additionally
, the
water
consumed in Brazil is much more than another country.

As the graph suggestion, in 1990, agriculture was the main source of consuming
water
, utilizing close to 3000 km whereas the others
used
water
just
under 1000 km each. For the whole 100-year periods, the figures for agriculture
saw
a dramatic rise while industry and domestic approximately remained stable by 1940 and then increased
gradually
over the period shown.

According the
table, the various and significant factors serve an
important
function in comparing two countries in 2000. Brazil has more population, roughly 176 million, than Democratic Republic Congo and
water
consumption for both countries were 359 m and 8 m
respectively
.
Given
this issue,
eventually
, the irrigated land in Brazil was
clearly
much more than another.
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