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The below chart show about the types of transportation used by children in one country in 1990 and 2010

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The chart illustrate about the modes of transportation used by students when ever they are travelling to school and when they are going back to home. From 5- 12 years children in one country between 1990 and 2010. Overall, Most of the child's prefer to go by walk in earlier days that is, in the year 1990. when, coming to 2010 many of them are going through cars. In contrast, very few of them used to go by car in olden days when compared, to now- a -days only some children's are going through their bicycles. Firstly, In the year 1990 about 12 million pupiles used travel school by walking. Coming, to cars only 4 million students made to travel. Next, through cycling, bus around 6 million and 8 million were used respectively, and about 5 million was used both bus and walking. Secondly, In 2010 most of the students used to travel through car over 11 million people. In contrast, walking, cycling, and busses were used by 6 million, 2 million and 5 million respectively, and about 3 million children used to go by both walking and bus.
The chart illustrate about the modes of transportation
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by students when ever they are travelling to school and when they are going back to home.
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From 5- 12
years children in one country between 1990 and 2010.

Overall
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that is
, in the year 1990.
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when
, coming to 2010
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of them are going
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cars
.
In contrast
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few of them
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to go by
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in olden days when compared, to
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now
- a -days
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children's are going
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their bicycles.

Firstly
, In the year 1990 about 12
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pupiles
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travel school by walking. Coming, to
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4
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students made to travel.
Next
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cycling, bus around 6
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and 8
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were
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respectively
, and about 5
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was
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both bus and walking.

Secondly
, In 2010 most of the students
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to travel
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over 11
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people
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by 6
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, 2
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and 5
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respectively
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children
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to go by both walking and bus.
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IELTS academic The below chart show about the types of transportation used by children in one country in 1990 and 2010

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