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The line graph demonstrates the information about the average utilization of Facebook and Twitter per person in a week in Australia from last five years since 2012. The data is calibrated in the number of times.

The line graph demonstrates the information about the average utilization of Facebook and Twitter per person in a week in Australia from last five years since 2012. The data is calibrated in the number of times. ENeyR
The line graph demonstrates the information about the average utilization of Facebook and Twitter per person in a week in Australia from last five years since 2012. The data is calibrated in the number of times. Overall, it is analysed that the data of usage of Twitter was maximum while, the minimum utilization of Facebook. It is clearly evident that the use of Facebook was exactly 20 times whereas, in Twitter it was inclined by 2 times in 2012. In the next year, the sharpest dropped in the utilization of Twitter that was 13 while, in 2014, it was just above 10. However, after the year of 2014, the use of Twitter was slowly inclined that was 13 times whilst, in 2016, it was sharply incined with 35 times. Moving to the remaining illustration, the utilization of Facebook was approximately 25 times whilst, in 2014, it inclined with to 30. After the year of 2014, it was slowly inclined by 1 times but in 2016, it was 33 times.
The line graph demonstrates the information about the average
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utilization
of Facebook and Twitter per person in a week in Australia from last five years since 2012. The data
is calibrated
in the number of times.

Overall
, it is
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analysed
that the data of usage of Twitter was maximum while, the minimum
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utilization
of Facebook.

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clearly
evident that the
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use
of Facebook was exactly 20
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times
whereas,
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in Twitter
it was
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inclined
by 2
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times
in 2012. In the
next
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year
, the sharpest dropped in the
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utilization
of Twitter that was 13 while, in 2014, it was
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above 10.
However
, after the
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year
of 2014, the
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use
of Twitter was
slowly
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inclined
that was 13
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times
whilst, in 2016, it was
sharply
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incined
with 35 times.

Moving to the remaining illustration, the
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utilization
of Facebook was approximately 25
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times
whilst, in 2014, it
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inclined
with to 30. After the
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year
of 2014, it was
slowly
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inclined
by 1
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times
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in 2016, it was 33
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.
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